HailToTheKingBaby! wrote:Would love feedback on the Bumblebee review, I think it's better than the original - I'm still finding my feet a little with it all and how VSDC works but getting there I think.
Hi! It's always a bit strange when I see the face behind a GRcader's avatar because you realise there is a human being there! I watched your Bumblebee video and channel trailer and it's a promising start. First things first, you are able to talk about your topic without a teleprompter or reading from a script which is fantastic, because it immediately makes you come across as more sincere and gives you an air of authority, I think this is probably the most important skill to have - I wish I had it.
You are talking softly, perhaps because you are naturally reserved or because there are other people in the house so you feel quite inhibited? But I bet on other occasions you can be quite lively so I would like to see and hear that in your delivery. You are clearly passionate about movies so let your viewers know that you have something to say that's worth listening to.
The sound is slightly out of sync with both videos, find out what's causing it. And this is just a personal view on your background, I can see a couple of sofas, a coat stand? a DVD shelf, a blanket covering something up, i'm distracted and looking at all the things in your home. Maybe you sitting in front of your DVD book shelf would be simpler and underline the movie expert theme. You've created a logo for your brand which is good, but when you show the movie shots you have two images on screen, so perhaps experiment with a png version so it removes the grey and just shows the tongue which can be less obtrusive, but that's just personal preference issue.
Overall, great stuff and well done for doing something that interests you!